Slate and the Book of Mormon as Literature

Posted on May 17, 2010
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Lots of discussion at LDS-Herm on Alan Wolfe’s review of The Book of Mormon as literature at Slate. Wolfe acknowledges it is much more complex than most think but has a hard time seeing it as great literature.

I actually agree, although I’m not sure why we ought expect it (or any ancient text) to be great literature. But then I’m pretty skeptical of the efforts the past couple of decades to make the Bible into great literature as well.

The one odd thing in the review is the following:


Hardy does convince me that writing the Book of Mormon required an amazing amount of dedication. How else to explain its length and the fervent imagination clearly at work within it. He has not convinced me that what was written qualifies as great, or even good.

Mormonism’s success suggests that a religion can flourish in spite of rather than because of its founding texts. I do not doubt that Mormons are inspired by the words associated with Joseph Smith. But if another reference to music is permitted, I simply cannot imagine anyone setting those words to music the way Handel did with the Bible in his oratorios. The Book of Mormon has a structure. It does not sing.

This somehow suggests that the power of a text in a religious context is its literary or poetic power. That strikes me as a very odd presupposition. Perhaps a bias to some of those who are English majors?

Someone else made the obvious critique. Wolfe writes,

Hardy adopts a similar approach to the story in the Book of Mormon most incredible to other Christians: the sudden appearance, in the Third Nephi, of Jesus Christ. The problem there is that the coming of Jesus to the New World is not foreshadowed in other portions of the text.

It’s hard to take the review seriously after that. One halfway imagines Wolfe didn’t read the text. After all Christ is almost mindnumbingly foreshadowed. I could see the critique that the foreshadowing isn’t subtle enough. But to say it isn’t even there… One of the main narratives in Helaman is the expectation of the coming of Christ which doesn’t happen as expected at the beginning of 3 Nephi. (i.e. Christ doesn’t show up until 33 years later)

But there were some who began to say that the time was past for the words to be fulfilled, which were spoken by Samuel, the Lamanite. And they began to rejoice over their brethren, saying: Behold the time is past, and the words of Samuel are not fulfilled; therefore, your joy and your faith concerning this thing hath been vain. (3 Ne 1:5-6)

But more prominently much of the initial opening of 1 Nephi and 2 Nephi is about prophesies about the coming of Christ.

Yea, even six hundred years from the time that my father left Jerusalem, a prophet would the Lord God raise up among the Jews—even a Messiah, or, in other words, a Savior of the world. (1 Ne 10:4)

Now none of this establishes the text as great literature. But it does suggest Wolfe’s reading was astoundingly superficial. (About on par with reading Lord of the Rings and being surprised the ring appears in Modor with Frodo without foreshadowing) I think what Wolfe was looking for was the part of the Book of Mormon akin to the Psalms. It wasn’t there. Thus, for Wolfe, the text lacked. That is a rather poor way to judge it, even in the debate about literature.

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18 Responses to “Slate and the Book of Mormon as Literature”

I could see the critique that the foreshadowing isn’t subtle enough. But to say it isn’t even there… Don’t you hate it when a review flounders on an obvious point where the author hasn’t actually read the book.

An interesting point is how many of the recorded sermons are chaistic structures. And how Samuel the Lamanite’s sermons are brute force triads rather than the more classic approach of sermons such as “Oh that I were an angel” (which makes a good song, all in all) — leading to Christ noting that they did not record all of his prophecy and asking why, with no one answering (err, Lord, well, he did not meet contemporary artistic standards, so we kind of didn’t write it all down …).

Wolfe should have talked to someone like Arthur Henry King who was taken with the poetry of the text before he was convinced by the Spirit. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Arthur_Henry_King

Hmm, he died ten years ago, guess it has been a long time since he was in my living room giving a presentation about his feelings about the gospel to a handful of us. Law school seems not that long ago somehow now.

There’s an interesting video floating around with Arthur Henry King, Hugh Nibley and Chauncey Riddle all talking about that sort of thing.

3 Michael Dorfman on May 18th, 2010 2:16 am

Clark:This somehow suggests that the power of a text in a religious context is its literary or poetic power. That strikes me as a very odd presupposition. Perhaps a bias to some of those who are English majors?

Is this really such a stretch? I mean, for example, taking a “memetic” approach, for a text to survive and spread, it requires that somebody repeat and copy it. And, surely a text that has literary or poetic would have a serious advantage over one that is lacking.

Slate:Mormonism’s success suggests that a religion can flourish in spite of rather than because of its founding texts

And that’s the point– that despite the lack of literary power, this text has somehow managed to get itself propagated. Impressive, and noteworthy.

Now, at the risk of offending: not to put too fine a point on it, but I have to agree with Mark Twain here. I’ve read a lot of religious scriptures in my time, and I’ve never come across one that is less “readerly” than the Book of Mormon. Sorry, but there it is.

Clark, if you have a link to the video, I’d love to see it, thanks.

Michael, my daughter thinks Lord of the Rings isn’t readerly either, not compared to Harry Potter. It all depends on what you read how other things resonate with you.

Michael, I think the problem is in assuming that religious value is the same as poetic value. Certainly it has to have value. I just think Wolfe is making some unwarranted assumptions about what generates value. To give an obvious example, outside of Genesis, what is the literary value of Numbers or Leviticus?

Stephen, I don’t have a link. FARMS used to sell it back in the 90′s.

6 chronotopian on May 18th, 2010 8:43 am

‘ The Book of Mormon has a structure. It does not sing.’

I’m not saying it’s Handel, but it has been done:

http://preview.farmsresearch.com/publications/jbms/?vol=8&num=2&id=195

It’s mostly just plagiarized from the Old Testament with some name changes. Worse, Joe Smith falsely claimed to have known hebrew, ancient egyptian, greek, who knows what else. And of course there are the problems of the supposed visions, the golden plates, all of it.

While there may be a certain moral code to mormonism–I think it’s a version of masonry (Smith was a mason)–that doesn’t excuse all the …BS. And the history of the church itself is hardly admirable. That said, I think the early mormons themselves were perhaps duped to some degree by “elders” (Twain suggested as much), even by the tyrant King Brigham–and there was probably a survivalist element, ie circle the wagons. Out west they were fighting the natives (and at times killing them), but also WASP settlers, outlaws, etc.

Finally, I don’t think the Framers–certainly not the Jeffersonian/Madisonian types–would have approved. James Buchanan, identified as Jeffersonian at times, didn’t–though read the history closely and one senses the US Govt. actually backed down from Brigham’s Nauvoo legions….

(please don’t tell me CS Peirce was in the LDS…)

8 Michael Dorfman on May 18th, 2010 11:34 am

Stephen: Michael, my daughter thinks Lord of the Rings isn’t readerly either, not compared to Harry Potter. It all depends on what you read how other things resonate with you.

I think you’re daughter’s got a good point there. The world that Tolkien created and populated is so compelling, it manages to get us to overlook how bad the writing is in “Lord of the Rings”, especially the second half. Tolkien was a gifted linguist and medievalist, and had a first-rate imagination, but unfortunately, had none of the writing skills of Rowling (or Pullman).

Clark:Michael, I think the problem is in assuming that religious value is the same as poetic value. Certainly it has to have value. I just think Wolfe is making some unwarranted assumptions about what generates value. To give an obvious example, outside of Genesis, what is the literary value of Numbers or Leviticus?

I think it is possible to talk about the two separately. I think we both can name some philosophical texts that have great intellectual value, and zero literary value. So, I’m not dismissing the religious value of the Book of Mormon– I’m not qualified to speak on the subject at all. Besides, I suspect that if literary value and religious value were identical, we’d all be sacrificing to Zeus and Athena right now.

I agree that Numbers and Leviticus are pretty much devoid of literary value– and if the Old Testament was comprised purely of works resembling them, well, we’d have something else resembling “chloroform in print”. Fortunately for those who have studied “The Bible As Literature”, only a small portion of the text is that dull; other parts are brilliantly written. Which brings to mind a thought experiment: what would Erich Auerbach have written about the Book of Mormon?

J., I’m pretty open to it not being great literature. As I said I don’t find most of the Bible great literature either. Plagerized from the Old Testament and Masonry is a harder sell. Certainly there’s a lot of quotes from the OT along with midrashic expansion. And the connection between Masonry and the LDS temple ordinances is well known. I’d disagree with the rest of your characterization although that’s clearly a subjective judgment.

Peirce definitely wasn’t a Mormon. He was initially Unitarian in upbringing and moved to become an Episcopalian after a particular religious experience. However his religious views tended to have a lot of parallels in many ways with Buddhism and rather less to orthodox Christianity. So far as I know he never even mentioned Mormonism.

Michael, I’ve read Atler a lot and do enjoy it. I actually think many of the narrative portions of the Book of Mormon parallel the complexity. However as is typical with the OT one has to be introduced to the structures to appreciate what is going on. And I still think it’s value as great literature is really vastly overstated. However the BoM is different from the OT in that it was compiled out of many texts for a particular purpose – and literature wasn’t it’s purpose. So if the Nephites had poetry and the like it just never made it into the Book of Mormon. Also note that the primary religious texts for the Nephites were some form of the OT and not the Book of Mormon itself. (Most of which was a kind of historic record more akin to 1 & 2 Kings or 1 & 2 Chronicles.)

Its obvious from his review that he already had a negative view of the LDS gospel…of course he had nothing good to say about it. IMO, its not much different than the Bible.

Well, if you don’t mind another helping of dissent, archaeological and historical evidence supports some of the Old Testament, aka Septuagint (not all…in fact less than most believers realize. The scholars of the LXX drew upon various semitic writings –hebrew itself was not really a language until much later), and the New Test. That is not the case with the BoM. There’s no evidence which would confirm Smith’s vision that one or more of the 12 tribes visited the Americas. The Nephite/Lamanite stuff also rather…odd. Personally, I think the Nephite concept was about like jews thinking themselves as the chosen people, or the calvinistic idea (bad idea) of the Elect. And the Lamanites? Un-chosen. :)

He was initially Unitarian in upbringing and moved to become an Episcopalian after a particular religious experience. However his religious views tended to have a lot of parallels in many ways with Buddhism and rather less to orthodox Christianity.

Yes, in brief I would agree that Peirce’s monistic elements, or “process-philosophy” could be read as slightly…pantheist, tho’ not specifically hinduistic or buddhistic (Im not a buddhist or hindu, but find some eastern religious thinking slightly interesting, and some buddh. schools–such as the theraveda–were, as the jargon goes, more immanent than transcendent or mystical).

I think Nephite self-identity is somewhat different than the pre-exilic “chosen people” view or the post-exilic one in opposition to Hellenism. Certainly quite different than what arose after the diasporah. There are a lot of subtle nuances to the Nephites. (grin)

Certainly there is some evidence for late Biblical history although most scholars think the majority of history is myth composed around or after the exile. (Which doesn’t necessarily make it so – but I don’t think there are many who take the history presented in the Torah too seriously)

As for Peirce and Buddhism, I’ll do a quick post later on that.

J. “There’s no evidence which would confirm Smith’s vision that one or more of the 12 tribes visited the Americas.”

Clark’s too kind to bring it up, but this kind of remark shows how remarkably little you know about the Book of Mormon and how remarkably shallow your reading of the text is. FYI the Book of Mormon doesn’t claim that one of the 12 tribes visited the Americas. With respect to archaeological evidence, I agree that there is a paucity of such evidence. That isn’t particularly surprising given the status of Meso-American archaeology. However, there is an abundance of literary and form-critical evidence to support it.

I disagree with Clark about the literary value of the Book of Mormon. I believe that it is great literature — just not great English literature. It reflects some of the best ascending staircase parallelism anywhere in any literature. I suggest Richard Rust’s book Feasting on the Word: The Literary Testimony of the Book of Mormon as a great source to get in touch with the literary beauty of the book. I also suggest Bruce Jorgensen’s article “The Dark Way to the Tree: Typological Unity in the Book of Mormon,” and George Tate’s article “The Typology of the Exodus Pattern in the Book of Mormon” in addition to John Welch’s articles on chiasmus in the Book of Mormon. I believe that the inability to appreciate the Book of Mormon tells us more about the readers abilities and depth rather than the book’s in light of these kinds of studies.

This probably came through better at the LDS-herm discussion but I’m pretty skeptical about “great literature” period. I think there is too much priming of context such that great literature becomes great literature due to a particular set of external practices and values. If someone wrote Beowulf today, would it be considered great literature? No. It’s its historical place plus the amount of commentary and analysis that makes it great literature. (Although I love John Gardner’s existential book Grendel)

I think Christine the references you raise demonstrate my point. To appreciate the Book of Mormon as literature requires a lot of priming of context. I should note that I do appreciate it as literature. I mentioned one of my favorite existential passages. It’s a bit out of character with the rest of the book, but understandable all things considered.

…wherefore, I conclude this record, declaring that I have written according to the best of my knowledge, by saying that the time passed away with us, and also our lives passed away like as it were unto us a dream, we being a lonesome and a solemn people, wanderers, cast out from Jerusalem, born in tribulation, in a wilderness, and hated of our brethren, which caused wars and contentions; wherefore, we did mourn out our days. (Jacob 7:26)

I think 2 Ne 4:16-35 holds up well as well. One problem the Church has is that the formatting of the current version of the Book of Mormon obscures a lot of the poetry. (I think this true of our KJV as well) Of course, as I noted, there’s not a lot of it in there.

re 13:

Apologies if it seemed insulting, but concerns about the reliability and authenticity of a religious text should not be considered an insult of the people who follow the religion. I respect many mormon people (not all)–Harry Reid even. Unlike many so-called christians, they tend to be industrious and …sober.

At the same time, the issues regarding reliability and authenticity which apply to the Bible (or koran) also apply to the BoM, and to the visions of Joseph Smith. I have a difficult time believing the literal truth of many biblical scenes, even the Resurrection. Thomas Jefferson did not accept the biblical miracles as literally true, and termed the Book of Revelation “the ravings of a madman”. A fortiori, Smith’s account of the Angel seems rather incredible and fantastic. As Clark most likely realizes, the Humean doubts must be dealt with (even if one rejects the dastardly Hume’s insistence on the uniformity of experience, there’s a story to tell).

Which is to say, perhaps we are better off reading the Bible or BoM or other religious texts as literature and as metaphorical rather than as literally true. That needn’t diminish the messages of wisdom and spiritual advice they have to offer.

I wouldn’t worry J. I’d say at least half the folks who read this blog are non-Mormon and probably the majority of those are atheists. I’d expect most folks — but especially the non-religious — to see our views as fantastic. At a minimum demanding a large amount of burden of proof.

That doesn’t really bother me (or I suspect most intellectually oriented Mormons) What I think does tend to get the goat of some Mormons is when our own views are discounted out of hand. As if we are somehow not doing serious and thoughtful investigation and inquiry and are merely being irrational. (I don’t think you were doing that, mind you – but I just wanted to contextualize things) But I think you can see why being discounted simply because of the content of ones beliefs rather than the reasoning one took to get there can be annoying. There’s a sense in which one is being told one is either delusional, weak minded, or deceitful.

I think it completely understandable, if not rational, to have concerns about the reliability or authenticity of other religious traditions. To even take a position on these questions (positive or negative) is to take a position on the authenticity of positions opposed to yours. What I worry about is that it’s all too easy for any group (Mormon, atheist, Protestant, etc.) to simply discount those who disagree as deluded or worse. That’s my complaint with the New Atheist movement, for instance – I don’t mind atheism in the least and consider it a fairly justifiable position. But the New Atheists tend to take the next step and attack the rationality of those who disagree with them. Typically in a pretty unwarranted fashion. Mormons who believe may believe for poor reasons. But there are plenty of thoughtful, critical Mormons who believe for reasonably justifiable reasons.

17 Grant Hardy on May 26th, 2010 5:44 am

I doubt that Mr. Wolfe read the entire Book of Mormon to write his Slate piece, but he did read my book, which is all that is required of reviewers. Even if I was unable to persuade him in the end, I did feel like he gave my arguments a fair hearing, for which I am grateful.

I’m sorry that the foreshadowing business has thrown off so many Latter-day Saints but Wolfe was simply echoing my own reading of the Book of Mormon (which was done with more care than he could convey in his short review). Here is what he read on pages 180 and 182 of _Understanding the Book of Mormon_:

“It seems obvious that the climax of the Book of Mormon is Christ’s three day visit to the Nephites. Jesus is the central figure of the book’s theology, and his earthly ministry and redemptive sacrifice had been prophesied, discussed, and anticipated among the Nephites since the time of Lehi. . . .

“Although the Book of Mormon contains some three dozen prophecies of Christ’s coming, the vast majority concern his life in Palestine—that he would be born, receive baptism, work miracles, be slain for the sins of the world, and then rise from the dead. Only five passages indicate that his ministry would include a post-resurrection visit to the New World. Nephi had spoken plainly on the subject (1 Ne. 12:4–7; 2 Ne. 26:1–9, 32:6), but these prophecies apparently did not have wide distribution. As late as 83 BC Alma explicitly states that he does not know whether Jesus will come to the Nephites (Alma 7:8), though he later receives a revelation that this would be the case (Alma 45:10), and Mormon reports that other prophets at the time “taught that he [Christ] would appear unto them after his resurrection” (Alma 16:20). Some have seen in this disjunction evidence that Joseph Smith was inventing the story as he went along, with Nephi’s predictions being so much clearer because his words were dictated after Third Nephi had already been written. In any case, there was not a strong expectation of Christ’s coming to the New World on anyone’s part, even after the time of Alma.

“Just before the book of Third Nephi begins, Samuel the Lamanite offers very specific prophecies about signs in the Americas of Jesus’ birth and death (with the former being predicted to occur in only five years’ time), yet he never mentions Christ’s visit. In fact, some of his listeners complain that they are being asked to believe in a figure who will live “in a land which is far distant,” and they wonder, “Why will he not show himself unto us as well as unto them who shall be at Jerusalem?” (Hel. 16:18, 20). Forty years later, as righteous survivors gather in Bountiful, they too are caught by surprise—when they hear a voice proclaim “Behold my Beloved Son” and see a celestial being descending from heaven, they “wist not what it meant, for they thought it was an angel that had appeared unto them.” Only after this personage proclaims, “I am Jesus Christ,” do they remember that “it had been prophesied among them that Christ should show himself unto them after his ascension into heaven” (3 Ne. 11:8–12). In short, the Book of Mormon story is not structured around a straightforward expectation of Jesus’ post-resurrection appearance among the Nephites that is satisfied and brought to an unambiguous conclusion; the workings of prophecy and God’s providence are portrayed as being a bit more enigmatic.”

I may be right or I may be wrong about how Christ’s visit to the Nephites fits into the overall narrative, but Mr. Wolfe’s review should not be summarily dismissed on the assumption that he knows nothing of the Book of Mormon.

First, thanks for commenting. I think that gives an interesting perspective for those of us who haven’t read your book. I do wonder whether it is appropriate for someone reviewing a book about an other book to have never extensively read the book being discussed. How on earth can the reviewer discern if the author is adequately engaging with the discussed book in question? We wouldn’t expect someone to review a book about Dante’s Divine Comedy who wasn’t well versed in Dante’s writings, for instance.

Regarding foreshadowing though I think the problem is Wolfe confuses the issue of the Nephites recognizing Christ’s coming with the issue of foreshadowing as a literary device. As you yourself noted in the above quotation, Christ’s coming is discussed even if not all people within the narrative are aware of this prophecy. How on earth could that then be taken as involving no foreshadowing?

Foreshadowing has nothing to do with the characters being aware of what is coming and everything to do with the reader being somewhat aware of what is coming. For Wolfe to make his argument requires not just having at best read the Book of Mormon superficially. It requires that he was a rather poor reader of the very passage you just quoted!

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